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Thursday, May 31, 2012
Comments for Shafie and Abdi here
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I didn't know that she used to be so successful. The audio clip that they played was a recording of the wrong person. In the future, you guys should probably double check for stuff like that. You guys could also try to keep slightly better eye contact.
I personally did not know that Whitney started as a background singer and that she use to model. The thing I found most interesting was that she started using drugs in the 80s, I did not know that! I liked that you had a lot of pictures and videos to show!
The presentation was good, I didn’t know Whitney was a background singer wow there were a lot of readings off a paper other then that the presentation was good!
it was good presentation they were clear and out spoken but it would have been better if they talk more about her music hits and albums and how many awards she won because thats what so unique about whitney houston
it was interesting on how they were talking about her and her family it added to their presentation and it was nice.
ReplyDeletethey looked at their notes to much so i felt they were talking to their paper not me.
nice presentation i like it, and learn more about Whitney and her family. the way they gave the presentation was nice.
ReplyDeleteI really like the information that they give us about her. I learned some information about her that I didn't know before.
ReplyDeleteThe way the presentation given out was great, they had some eye contact to the audience.
Great presentation! I've learned a lot of things about her at the same time, I'll call it a performance as well! great job guys:)
ReplyDeleteI didn't know that she used to be so successful. The audio clip that they played was a recording of the wrong person. In the future, you guys should probably double check for stuff like that. You guys could also try to keep slightly better eye contact.
ReplyDeleteI personally did not know that Whitney started as a background singer and that she use to model. The thing I found most interesting was that she started using drugs in the 80s, I did not know that! I liked that you had a lot of pictures and videos to show!
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ReplyDeleteThe presentation was good, It was straight to the point on why she is iconic. She was a great singer, its sad that she died that way
ReplyDeleteThe presentation was good, I didn’t know Whitney was a background singer wow there were a lot of readings off a paper other then that the presentation was good!
ReplyDeleteThe presentation was perfect, the one that stood out was she had great voice
ReplyDeleteit was good presentation they were clear and out spoken but it would have been better if they talk more about her music hits and albums and how many awards she won because thats what so unique about whitney houston
ReplyDeleteI never knew she was married to Bobby Brown! Now i know:) I really enjoyed how you guys played her music a lot! it was fun to listen to
ReplyDeletegreat presentation i liked the audio clips and i learned a lot of her addiction and what she went through...
ReplyDeleteyou guys did great job!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletei did not know she end up with being alcoholic
ReplyDeletebtw great presentation!:)
They did great on explaining about Whitney Houston!
ReplyDeleteOut of all the things that I knew about the great Whitney Houston, I didnt know that she was a drug addict.
ReplyDeleteI would've love them to also talk a little about her achievements, such as awards.
It was on the handouts bashir all of her awards
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