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Tuesday, May 29, 2012
Comments for Hawo, Halimo, and Fardowsa
In your comments, please write one thing about the content and
information given. Then, write one thing about the presentation style
(the way it was given).
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I did not know that it was built because of a love story but I also think if the mans wife that died knew that he cut off all the hands of the workers she may not like it as much. Well actually she might since she was in love with the man, who knows. But I do think the thought of it was sweet.
I liked the slide backgrounds, they were very pretty!
good presentation, it was very strange and cruel to cut off the hands of all the workers when the monument was completed! Could have been a bit better organized but overall good speach
The way that the presentation was give was good. the information that they give us was when it was built, who built it and why it was built. they show us really good pictures of the taj mahal.
I like the reason why this building was built for, Love can be big and BEAUTIFUL at the same time. Poor workers for getting their hands chopped off. :(
I didn't know that it was inspired by a true love story which I thought was interesting. I also thought it was very beautiful but it tainted it when I found out about the workers hands being chopped off. The slides and videos were very interesting, especially the video showing the structure and land around it.
From the Taj Mahal presentation I learned that it was iconic because of its beauty and the way it was shaped or built. I never knew there was such a thing like the Taj Mahal in India because I thought India was poor and won’t be able to build something like that. I also learned it was built because of a love story. I might visit it one day hopefully.The Taj Mahal presentation was a great presentation. The style was pretty decent, there were a lot of readings off a paper but I liked the background picture of the Taj Mahal. It was amazing…
I though the subject was really interesting. I didnt know that it took that long to build. It took many hardships in the making but in the end it made a great building.
It's beautiful place to visit, Always want it to go there and I was glad today to hear more information and history about Taj Mahal. The way the presentation was giving was good.
I had no idea that such a beautiful building so much injustice connected to it. So many workers had their hands cut off. I liked that the video showed many different views of the building, but I don't think that it added very much information.
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ReplyDeleteI did not know that it was built because of a love story but I also think if the mans wife that died knew that he cut off all the hands of the workers she may not like it as much. Well actually she might since she was in love with the man, who knows. But I do think the thought of it was sweet.
ReplyDeleteI liked the slide backgrounds, they were very pretty!
good presentation, it was very strange and cruel to cut off the hands of all the workers when the monument was completed! Could have been a bit better organized but overall good speach
ReplyDeleteThe way that the presentation was give was good. the information that they give us was when it was built, who built it and why it was built.
ReplyDeletethey show us really good pictures of the taj mahal.
The presentation was well organized. Its hard to believe someone could be so cruel to his own workers!
ReplyDeleteI like the reason why this building was built for, Love can be big and BEAUTIFUL at the same time. Poor workers for getting their hands chopped off. :(
ReplyDeleteI didn't know that it was inspired by a true love story which I thought was interesting. I also thought it was very beautiful but it tainted it when I found out about the workers hands being chopped off. The slides and videos were very interesting, especially the video showing the structure and land around it.
ReplyDeleteFrom the Taj Mahal presentation I learned that it was iconic because of its beauty and the way it was shaped or built. I never knew there was such a thing like the Taj Mahal in India because I thought India was poor and won’t be able to build something like that. I also learned it was built because of a love story. I might visit it one day hopefully.The Taj Mahal presentation was a great presentation. The style was pretty decent, there were a lot of readings off a paper but I liked the background picture of the Taj Mahal. It was amazing…
ReplyDeleteI am so wonderful how is beautiful building i never seen that is good
ReplyDeleteI though the subject was really interesting. I didnt know that it took that long to build. It took many hardships in the making but in the end it made a great building.
ReplyDeleteIt's beautiful place to visit, Always want it to go there and I was glad today to hear more information and history about Taj Mahal. The way the presentation was giving was good.
ReplyDeleteis hard to believe he did it for love
ReplyDeleteThat is a really neat place and I found that they had a good amount of info to tell the class.
ReplyDeleteThe Taj Mahal was built in 1632-1653. The presentation had very vivid background details. Details about why it's iconic were also very interesting.
ReplyDeleteIts really sad how the worker's hands were chopped off. Quite an interesting material...so much to learn
ReplyDeleteit was beautiful place i like to vised and he blind house for her love
ReplyDeleteI had no idea that such a beautiful building so much injustice connected to it. So many workers had their hands cut off. I liked that the video showed many different views of the building, but I don't think that it added very much information.
ReplyDeletethis is such great presentation a performance. This has more of an interesting thoughts, however that's what makes me to learn from the Taj Mahal!
ReplyDeleteit was great presentation and beautiful building.
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