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Tuesday, May 29, 2012
Comments for David and Evan
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I didn't know that there was a man. Michael Collins that was there but didn't get to walk on the moon. I really liked the way the presented not reading off of their slides but knowing the information in their heads was really impressive.
great presentation skills and public speaking. very easy to follow and i enjoyed the presentation. I found it amazing that it took 100 hours just to make it to the moon, as i thought it was only a few hour trip. Overall very good presentation
I learned a lot from this presentation. One thing was that America was actually losing the space race to the USSR until the early 1960s. One thing I really enjoyed about the presentation style was how you explained the different parts and functions of the Saturn V
I learned a lot from this presentation that i didn't know before. It gives me a lot interesting information about the space and how it goes to the moon.it was great information to know. I also like the way they present it and how they organized.
It was great presentation and great ability and out spoken and lot of information’s about almost everything and after all how they cover everything in 12 minutes was great, also the image that they use and the graphs
The outcome of the Moon Walk resulted in research developed, people being inspired and the U.S. being ahead of the Soviet Union in the "Space Race." Great speakers and vivid details, such as videos and images will make this presentation hard to top raising the bar very high.
I didn't know that there was a man. Michael Collins that was there but didn't get to walk on the moon. I really liked the way the presented not reading off of their slides but knowing the information in their heads was really impressive.
ReplyDeletegreat presentation skills and public speaking. very easy to follow and i enjoyed the presentation. I found it amazing that it took 100 hours just to make it to the moon, as i thought it was only a few hour trip. Overall very good presentation
ReplyDeleteI learned a lot from this presentation. One thing was that America was actually losing the space race to the USSR until the early 1960s. One thing I really enjoyed about the presentation style was how you explained the different parts and functions of the Saturn V
ReplyDeleteFrom the presentation I learned a lot. I didnt know much about it in the first place. There was a lot of information that was interesting.
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ReplyDeleteNever knew there was such a thing as "space race." So much knowledge gain from, effective use of slides.
Deletei really learned a lot i didn't know much about. it was very interesting!!
ReplyDeleteI learned a lot from this presentation that i didn't know before. It gives me a lot interesting information about the space and how it goes to the moon.it was great information to know. I also like the way they present it and how they organized.
ReplyDeleteIt was great presentation and great ability and out spoken and lot of information’s about almost everything and after all how they cover everything in 12 minutes was great, also the image that they use and the graphs
ReplyDeleteThese guys brought their "A" game to class today and where very organized, they speaked loud, and where very convincing to the class. I LOVED IT! :D
ReplyDeletethis presntation taught me a lot things and how to crater experiment in the moon!
ReplyDeleteIt was the best presentation so far I seen. Great info and well prepared. GOOD JOB GUYS!
ReplyDeletethe presentation i learned the moon was space race to the USSR The early 1960
ReplyDeletei really like the presentation and the way they talked about the moon landing. i also learn many things about moon landing good job.
ReplyDeleteI learned tons of information on this presentation such as soil is similar to the soil on the earth, and that the moon may have come from the earth.
ReplyDeleteI thought that the presentation was very well organized and the video worked well with your points.
The outcome of the Moon Walk resulted in research developed, people being inspired and the U.S. being ahead of the Soviet Union in the "Space Race." Great speakers and vivid details, such as videos and images will make this presentation hard to top raising the bar very high.
ReplyDeleteit was a really cool presentation in a style that I've never seen before, even the video was much helpful!
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