A blog for writing and discussion in English 110 at The Ohio State University in Marion.
Thursday, May 31, 2012
Comments for Harmony and Cassia here
In your comments, please write one thing about the content and
information given. Then, write one thing about the presentation style
(the way it was given).
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wow i didnt know that it was made from sticks and mud before it was made into stone. thats really cool.
great work on presenting you were loud and it was clear, also you didnt look at your notes as much or at all. it felt like you were talking to me which is awesome. great job!!
I thought that the presentation went really well and you were the only group to do a poster which was different and cool! I always thought that the wall was just one wall built together and I found it interesting knowing it wasn't. Also the fact that it took 2000 years to build was so crazy, I am surprised that it was kept up over those years!
I thought the presentation as good, it was clear as to why the great wall of china is iconic. It's surprising to know that it took 2000 years to finish.
it was great presentation learned good intersting facts about the great wall i think they had alot of good information and the poster had good pictures
One thing I didnt about the Great Wall of China is that some parts of the wall are not protected and people take bricks out of it to build houses. Because as an iconic wall the Chinese government should've made a little effort to preserve it.
wow i didnt know that it was made from sticks and mud before it was made into stone. thats really cool.
ReplyDeletegreat work on presenting you were loud and it was clear, also you didnt look at your notes as much or at all. it felt like you were talking to me which is awesome. great job!!
good job you guys and the way you give the presentation was great also you were aloud.
ReplyDeleteYou guys did great job, you gave us a lot of information about this the wall.
ReplyDeleteThe way you guys did the presentation was good, you were loud enough.
I thought it was interesting that the Chinese were encouraged to remove bricks from it during the cultural revolution.
ReplyDeleteThey spoke clearly and made good eye contact.
the presentation was fantastic and you guys gave us a lot of interesting thing as well! so you guys made a good eye contact and clear spoke!
ReplyDeleteI thought that the presentation went really well and you were the only group to do a poster which was different and cool! I always thought that the wall was just one wall built together and I found it interesting knowing it wasn't. Also the fact that it took 2000 years to build was so crazy, I am surprised that it was kept up over those years!
ReplyDeleteI thought the presentation as good, it was clear as to why the great wall of china is iconic. It's surprising to know that it took 2000 years to finish.
ReplyDeletethe presentation was good and i think you guys did amazing job.
ReplyDeletewell done that was great presentation. the amazing is it took a lot years to build & lost a lot Lives
ReplyDeleteit was great presentation learned good intersting facts about the great wall i think they had alot of good information and the poster had good pictures
ReplyDeleteyou guys did great job the place cost west 5.5000 mile that is amazing
ReplyDeletei didnt know how much history at different time periods were involved, its amazing! great presentation
ReplyDeleteit was great presentation i really enjoy it, the way you guys explained, it was understandable.
ReplyDeleteHarmony and Cassie did really great job and they had good resource too.
ReplyDeleteOne thing I didnt about the Great Wall of China is that some parts of the wall are not protected and people take bricks out of it to build houses. Because as an iconic wall the Chinese government should've made a little effort to preserve it.
ReplyDeleteGreat presentation over all.