A blog for writing and discussion in English 110 at The Ohio State University in Marion.
Thursday, May 31, 2012
Comments for Mohamed and Fadumo here
In your comments, please write one thing about the content and
information given. Then, write one thing about the presentation style
(the way it was given).
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This building is a great and beautiful building and I have never seen building like this. It designed in such great way. They also give us some information about the hotel like how it was built who built it and when it was built.
It was good presentation, but they should be a little but louder and make some eye contact too.
It was interesting how the architect studied their culture and used it as inspiration for the shape of the building. The presentation was good, but they could have spoken a little louder.
I think that this building is beautiful! I think you guys knew a lot of information that was asked and loved the pictures you used! I thought it was crazy that Tom Wright had to figure out the culture just to design the building but he did a really great job! I still am amazed that it costs 1000 minimum and that someone has actually stayed there 3 nights and 4 days!
I think the style that most got my attention was the gorgeous Photos. the other thing i understood from this presentation is "you have to be rich in order to spend one night"
it was great presentation i learned more about Buraj Al rab and how they bulid it and i think it was very beatiful, they were good speakers and they had alot information's
wow he studied the way they lived before building the biulding and its beautiful. thats awesome that he cares about the countries culture.
ReplyDeleteit could have been a little louder but all in all you did a great job.
Beautiful hotel that I had every seen I really like it nice one. It also has beautiful rooms inside of the hotel.
ReplyDeleteThis building is a great and beautiful building and I have never seen building like this. It designed in such great way. They also give us some information about the hotel like how it was built who built it and when it was built.
ReplyDeleteIt was good presentation, but they should be a little but louder and make some eye contact too.
It was interesting how the architect studied their culture and used it as inspiration for the shape of the building. The presentation was good, but they could have spoken a little louder.
ReplyDeleteI think that this building is beautiful! I think you guys knew a lot of information that was asked and loved the pictures you used! I thought it was crazy that Tom Wright had to figure out the culture just to design the building but he did a really great job! I still am amazed that it costs 1000 minimum and that someone has actually stayed there 3 nights and 4 days!
ReplyDeleteThe building is ceautiful both from the outside and inside. There was a lot of interesting facts about the building and why it was iconic.
ReplyDeletewow what a Beautiful building!! It was interesting how the architect studied their culture great presentation..
ReplyDeleteI think the style that most got my attention was the gorgeous Photos. the other thing i understood from this presentation is "you have to be rich in order to spend one night"
ReplyDeleteit was great presentation i learned more about Buraj Al rab and how they bulid it and i think it was very beatiful, they were good speakers and they had alot information's
ReplyDeleteIt is crazy expensive to stay there but i would love to play tennis there!
ReplyDeletei was wash i go there this is beautiful and very romantic place
ReplyDeletegreat presentation! its amazing that its all man made, even the island that it stands on!
ReplyDeletethis building its beautiful i really like the way they build.and i wonder how that guy think about how to build on.
ReplyDeleteI really don't care if only rich people go there,I now know where my honeymoon is going to be at!
ReplyDeleteI never knew that the shape was meant to be a sail boat as sail boats people of the land used to travel/fish.
ReplyDeleteGreat pictures that make you want to go there. P.S. I now know where the craziest place to play a sport is; some thousands feet above the ground.