A blog for writing and discussion in English 110 at The Ohio State University in Marion.
Thursday, May 31, 2012
Comments for Nur and Kelsie here
In your comments, please write one thing about the content and
information given. Then, write one thing about the presentation style
(the way it was given).
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it was built in 1941 thats impressive and it is the 3rd largest in america and the 14th in the world wow thats really cool.
had to much information on the screen it was to much to follow. i found myself reading the information instead of listening to them present. other than that it was pretty good.
The presentation was nice. I never really thought of it as a big deal, but with a lot of attraction that it gets, it shows how much hard work was made to have people admire the building.
it was built in 1941 thats impressive and it is the 3rd largest in america and the 14th in the world wow thats really cool.
ReplyDeletehad to much information on the screen it was to much to follow. i found myself reading the information instead of listening to them present. other than that it was pretty good.
Waaw It was really great presentation. I have learned a lot of information about it that i have never knew it before.
ReplyDeleteThey were good and the way they did it was good and organized as well.
It is cool that they have a race up the steps.
ReplyDeleteI thought that they made good eye contact throughout the presentation.
I really liked the presentation you guys did amazing job and I have learned a lot of information about it that have never knew before.
ReplyDeleteThe presentation style is good not spoken too fast or too slow, no “ums” and “uhs”, makes eye contact with audience and smiles.
ReplyDeleteit was great presentation i enjoyed learning more about the empire state building !
ReplyDeletei would love to run that marathon!!
ReplyDeletewawww i really enjoyed your presentation and also i like the way you guy presented. i learned more about empire.
ReplyDeleteThe presentation was nice. I never really thought of it as a big deal, but with a lot of attraction that it gets, it shows how much hard work was made to have people admire the building.
ReplyDeletei really enjoy the presentation i learn a lot think ... before i don't know this building is the told the world
ReplyDeleteKing Kong! i liked how easy the presentation was to follow and i enjoyed listening, great job!
ReplyDeletethis presentation that's really interesting to learn about it. also they were truly an amazing speaker:))
ReplyDeletegreat presentation i really enjoyed it! :)
ReplyDeleteAww thanks guys! lol You guys did GREAT TOO!
ReplyDeleteI was surprised to learn that there are no rooms to stay and restaurants and that's only offices.
ReplyDeleteYou guys should be t.v. show hosts or something.