Thursday, May 31, 2012

Comments for Shafie and Abdi here

In your comments, please write one thing about the content and information given.  Then, write one thing about the presentation style (the way it was given).

Post all comments under this post, so the students can get feedback for their work.

Thanks,

Mike

18 comments:

  1. it was interesting on how they were talking about her and her family it added to their presentation and it was nice.

    they looked at their notes to much so i felt they were talking to their paper not me.

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  2. nice presentation i like it, and learn more about Whitney and her family. the way they gave the presentation was nice.

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  3. I really like the information that they give us about her. I learned some information about her that I didn't know before.

    The way the presentation given out was great, they had some eye contact to the audience.

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  4. Great presentation! I've learned a lot of things about her at the same time, I'll call it a performance as well! great job guys:)

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  5. I didn't know that she used to be so successful. The audio clip that they played was a recording of the wrong person. In the future, you guys should probably double check for stuff like that. You guys could also try to keep slightly better eye contact.

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  6. I personally did not know that Whitney started as a background singer and that she use to model. The thing I found most interesting was that she started using drugs in the 80s, I did not know that! I liked that you had a lot of pictures and videos to show!

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  8. The presentation was good, It was straight to the point on why she is iconic. She was a great singer, its sad that she died that way

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  9. The presentation was good, I didn’t know Whitney was a background singer wow there were a lot of readings off a paper other then that the presentation was good!

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  10. The presentation was perfect, the one that stood out was she had great voice

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  11. it was good presentation they were clear and out spoken but it would have been better if they talk more about her music hits and albums and how many awards she won because thats what so unique about whitney houston

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  12. I never knew she was married to Bobby Brown! Now i know:) I really enjoyed how you guys played her music a lot! it was fun to listen to

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  13. great presentation i liked the audio clips and i learned a lot of her addiction and what she went through...

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  14. you guys did great job!!!!!!!!!

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  15. i did not know she end up with being alcoholic
    btw great presentation!:)

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  16. They did great on explaining about Whitney Houston!

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  17. Out of all the things that I knew about the great Whitney Houston, I didnt know that she was a drug addict.

    I would've love them to also talk a little about her achievements, such as awards.

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  18. It was on the handouts bashir all of her awards

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